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I´m not Karin but yeah lol, you are making the mistakes that all "first-time-making-AMV" people does... you let yourself go with the scenes, edit a little more and synch with the beats, some suggestions
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Of course I´m not expecting an awesome AMV (like a pro´s AMV) since its your first one, just have fun making it, since thats what counts really in the first try LOL.
... ok kill me for the not-usefull-comment X_x