Shouri - Ichirin no Hana - Spoilers - Finished!

[Shouri No Hana]

[Tri-Kun]

[Shouri No Hana]

AHHH WTF...I can't to anything with this! I've reloaded the program, I have a lot more free space on my computer but it still isn't working! I've tried to cut it up into smaller sections. (because there is alot of effects) but it won't render!

I keep getting some 'An Exception has occured' error!

Although it is January 1st I have hopefully sloved my problem! I just ugraded my Vegas and everything is running smoothly, so it should be done soon!

[matt13346]

Well, I hope you get yours down soon. I've been looking forward to seeing yours since I've already finished mine. (I wanted to compare lol) Good luck with your problem and I hope to see that finished version up soon ^^

[JH24]

No, not this song again! My head! ><


Your AMV is absolutely awesome, but for some reason I don't really like the music. However, the music is very fast in certain parts and I am really impressed how well you matched the scenes with the music. Unbelievable.


I wanted to make a long comment containing all my impressions just as I did with my first reviews but the holidays for me are over so I don't have as much time then first. Still, after watching your great AMV writing a few comments is the least I can do. I really enjoyed watching your AMV. It is very visible how much time and work you have put into your preview.


My favorite part of your AMV has to be 0:49-1:48. The slower music in the beginning is very nice as well. I also really like that 'tv-effect'.


The only very small thing I noticed was 2:05-2:10, for some reason this part took me out of the AMV for a few seconds. I guess because it does not entirely match the music at that point. However, from the moment the virus slams his hammer into the ground that feeling is over. (I am sorry, I am probably nitpicking again)


Your AMV is really great, and I enjoyed viewing it, especially the middle part. I really look forward to your final version. Awesome work!

[Shouri No Hana]

[Shouri No Hana]

Let me just wait another 21 minutes....yawn

In the mean time:

Titles: Ryuusei no Rockman.EXE - Ichirin no Hana
Anime: Rockman.EXE & Ryuusei no Rockman
Song: Ichirin no Hana ~Huge Hollow Mix~
Artist: HIGH and MIGHTY Color

16 mintues...I guess I can go do my math homework...

Three minutes...slow...

Link:

I don't think I'll bother with YouTube.

[KingForte]

[matt13346]

Hey, that was pretty good ^^ I'm gonna go ahead and leave a little review^^ Also, take into consideration that my review is purely based on your amv, and I'm NOT comparing it to mine at all!! And b4 writing this review...I made sure to watch your amv several times b4 hand...oh and fyi...it was AWESOME!!

Presentation: 0:02-0:09 was good. The video went well with the mood of the song.

Sync: Was really good, although...some parts of the amv seemed really plain to me. For example, 2:07 - 2:26 was sync'd really well, but I believe you could've done more with that part, even if Vegas was giving you problems at first. Also 2:53 - 2:57 seemed very slow paced for a fast paced song. Also, don' t take this the wrong way but, I luv'd the beginning of your amv!! The sync and use of effects was excellent...but looking at the new additions to your amv...I was a little disappointed. I believe (From seeing your past amv's) that you could've done more towards the end of your amv.

Although, 3:25 - 3:38 was perfect, I really liked that part. The use of effects and sync was superb. Same goes for 3:44 - 3:55., but 3:56 - 4:04 also seemed kinda plain...idk it still seems like you could've added more IMO. Also that specific part was very slowed paced and IMO, the song was still fast paced at that point.

Also, I noticed a picture doesn't remove at 3:41 - 3:42...a common mistake for a amv maker tho.

Ending: That was a nice way to end the amv. The mood of the song and video were perfectly sync'd IMO. I also liked what you did at 4:04 - 4:34, which was also sync'd very well.

Overall: It was a good amv, that kept me very entertained (Although after making my amv to this song...i now couldn't really give a darn about the song, but my review wasn't based on my personal opinion on the song -_- ) The amv was kinda plain at some points, but the overall sync and mood of the amv made up for that. The use of effects was superb...I'm still tinkering with Vegas to understand some of those effects -_-.

So here it is...I'll give your amv a 9.2/10 because it was a great amv, but I believe you could've done more.

[XHunter]

you should really edit your first post to reflect the complete work.

[Shouri No Hana]

I can do that....>.> hrm...

@matt:

2:07-2:26: was a hard spot to do, Vegas wasn't acting up there yet, the song was still somewhat slow and I wanted a cooldown from the mass effects eariler, that's why I kept it settle.

2:53-2:57: okay...it really depends on what one is focusing on, you may have looked at the music, but I was going for the lyric, the lyric was sung slow so I followed with the clip.

3:56-4:04: Actually I believe it fits, the song is actually slowing down there, if I kept it fast pace it would have killed the ending.

The clip does move at 3:41-3:42 but it's move too fast that it looks like it isn't moving, watch the sky.

Sigh...I'll never make version two of this NEVAR!

[matt13346]

[XHunter]

[OMEGA]

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