since tri-kun has pointed out some mistakes, so i won't repeat it again.
my comments(vidilife time):
00:18~00:15
the white round border thing is too thick imo.
and also try to avoid some unnecessary lip syncr , like 00:32 "in mouth", it looks kinda pointless using lip syncr at this time. it has no any meaning at all and nothing to express.
anyway, you have improved much since last time. keep it up ^^
my comments(vidilife time):
00:18~00:15
the white round border thing is too thick imo.
and also try to avoid some unnecessary lip syncr , like 00:32 "in mouth", it looks kinda pointless using lip syncr at this time. it has no any meaning at all and nothing to express.
anyway, you have improved much since last time. keep it up ^^
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